May I?

[aquablue]

I realize that this is a book review forum ONLY, but may I post a portion of a short story I wrote so as to read your input on it. This is my very first story, ever, so it will NOT be up to your liking. Nevertheless, please review it for me.

First of all can I post it? :?:

[Colyngbourne]

Yes, aq. There is a sub-forum for Palimper's own writing just underneath the All About Palimpsest section on the main page:
Features (http://palimpsest.org.uk/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=9) which is for
Articles, Stories, Essays and other stuff from Palimpsest Contributors. If you're brave enough, feel free to post your efforts!

[John Self]

And I'm editing your signature again, aquablue. Please keep it within normal font size.

[aquablue]

Can I keep the link John?

[John Self]

Yes, though you may want to rethink the subtitle.

[aquablue]

okay...I will delete the subtitle.